WALT: Edit and proof Read our writing
1. Someone had been digging holes all over the place. Eve suspected it was Cecil but Matt suspected it was Skulla. They found the rest of the Rothery Stone in the Redwoods and also Dr McMillin Prediction came true because there was an explosion in the Whakarewarewa Mud pools.
PLUS
That they finally found the diamonds.
MINUS
That there was an explosion at Whaka and at the start someone was digging holes in the city
INTERESTING
Jack Boults death and whats going to happen to Juzza.
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