Wednesday, 17 October 2012

Diamante

War
Bloody, Pain
Killing, Struggling, Bombarding
No killing, No destruction
Hurting, Dying, Suffering
Frightened, Shaken
Peace



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5 comments:

  1. Ryan N18 October 2012 at 13:50

    Shoot Perham you used goods words for your poem

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  2. Hayden's Blog18 October 2012 at 14:22

    Mean word in there Hayze loved the verbs.

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  3. Brad's Blog18 October 2012 at 14:23

    Chur, mean poem. I really like the thought gone into this poem

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  4. taine gangsta blog18 October 2012 at 14:26

    mean poem g loved your descriptive language. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

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  5. Carolina Panthers (james blog)18 October 2012 at 14:28

    mean as poem cus keep it up

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