Thursday 18 October 2012


They ready there selves for the bloodiest and most horrible ending
Fear was the only thing on their face
The tummy grumbling sounding enemy plane inches closer by the second
FIRE!!
The End is near.
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6 comments:

  1. Brad's Blog18 October 2012 at 14:00

    Great poem. You put some thought into this. GREAT PERSONIFICATION !!!!!

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  2. Brad's Blog18 October 2012 at 14:01

    Great poem. You put some thought into this. GREAT PERSONIFICATION !!!!!

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  3. Ryan N18 October 2012 at 14:10

    Great war words it describes the situation

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  4. taine gangsta blog18 October 2012 at 14:25

    loved your poem bruk, mean discreptive language. You set this work to a high standerd. KEEP IT UP

    love from Taine

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  5. Hayden's Blog18 October 2012 at 14:26

    Great descripitve word loved the bloodiest and most horiible ending line.

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  6. Carolina Panthers (james blog)18 October 2012 at 14:26

    Awesome poem u should make a 2 won i wont to see whats happends

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