Hayze@Swaveland
Tuesday 23 October 2012
HAIKU
We wait anxiously
Wish our warriors return
From the battle field
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zxkvl
24 October 2012 at 11:15
Your last line is 6 syllables. otherwise, good.
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Your last line is 6 syllables. otherwise, good.
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